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The bar chart below shows the number of five different types of non-medical staff employed at a clinic in the UK between 2000 and 2015.

主體段分段方法：按照<變化幅度>分段

主體1：administrative staff，IT support staff, cleaners（變化幅度大）

主體2：maintenance staff，security guards（變化幅度小）

開頭段

The bar chart illustrates changes in the number of employees across five non-medical roles in a UK clinic between 2000 and 2015.

概述段

Overall, the five positionsexhibited varying trends, with IT support staffexperiencing the most dramatic growth.Additionally, administrative staffremained the largest groupthroughout the given period.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- 五種崗位員工數(shù)量呈現(xiàn)不同變化趨勢(shì)，其中IT support staff變化最急劇

- administrative staff人數(shù)始終最高

Body paragraph 1

Three out of the five occupationssaw significant changesover the 15-year period. Managerial staffmore than doubled,rising rapidlyfrom 45 in 2000 to 110 in 2015.Likewise, the number of IT engineerssoaredfrom just 5 to 55,representing an 11-fold increase.By contrast, the number of cleanersdeclined steadilyfrom 30 to 10 during the same period.

思路要點(diǎn)：administrative staff，IT support staff, cleaners

- 有三種崗位人數(shù)變化顯著

- administrative staff：人數(shù)幾乎上漲超過2倍，2000年為45→急劇上升到2015年達(dá)到110

- IT support staff：200年為5→2015年急劇上升到55

- cleaners：持從30持續(xù)下降到10

Body paragraph 2

The remaining two groups,however,experienced far less significant changes.Starting at20 in 2000, the number of maintenance staffbarely changedduring the 15 years,dipping marginallyto 19 by 2015.Meanwhile,despiteminor fluctuations, the figure for security guardskept relatively stableat around 15.

思路要點(diǎn)：maintenance staff，security guards

- 其余兩組員工人數(shù)變化幅度相對(duì)較小

- maintenance staff：2000年為20→隨后15年幾乎不變，到2015年小幅度下降到19

- security guards：輕微波動(dòng)，但整體人數(shù)大約穩(wěn)定在15

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