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The charts below give information about the purposes of travel for passengers using four different UK airports in 2016.

主體段分段方法：按照餅分段

主體1：Stansted Airport、Luton Airport

主體2：Gatwick Airport、Heathrow Airport

開頭段

The pie charts compare the primary reasons for travel among passengers at four airports—Gatwick, Stansted, Heathrow and Luton—in 2016.

概述段

At both Stansted and Luton, visiting friends and family wasthe dominant reason for travel,constituting48% and 47% respectively. Holiday travel wasthe next most common purpose, with 36% of passengers at Stansted and 34% at Luton flying for a vacation.By contrast, business travelcomprisedunder one-fifth at each airport,whiletrips for other reasons were negligible, at merely 2%.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- 四個(gè)機(jī)場(chǎng)的 visiting friends and family members、Holiday占比都較高

- business占比都較低

Body paragraph 1

At both Stansted and Luton, visiting friends and family wasthe dominant reason for travel,constituting48% and 47% respectively. Holiday travel wasthe next most common purpose, with 36% of passengers at Stansted and 34% at Luton flying for a vacation.By contrast, business travelcomprisedunder one-fifth at each airport,whiletrips for other reasons were negligible, at merely 2%.

思路要點(diǎn)：Stansted Airport、 Luton Airport

- 這兩個(gè)機(jī)場(chǎng)藍(lán)色(visiting friends and family)占比都最大，分別為48%和47%

- 兩個(gè)機(jī)場(chǎng)排名第二位的都是黃色(holiday)，分別為36%和34%

- 綠色(business)占比都不超過(guò)20%，紅色(other)都僅占2%，

Body paragraph 2

The remaining two airports, however, demonstrated different patterns.At Gatwick, holiday travelaccounted for the largest proportion, at 54%. Visits to friends and familyrepresented30%,roughly twice the share ofbusiness-related travel.In comparison, holiday trips and social visitswere equally popularat Heathrow Airport,each accounting for35%. About a quarter of passengers travelled for business (26%),which was more than four times the figure forother purposes (4%).

思路要點(diǎn)：Gatwick Airport、Heathrow Airport

- Gatwick Airport：黃色(holiday)占比最高(54%)；藍(lán)色(visiting families and friends)占比30%，大約是綠色(business)的2倍

- Heathrow Airport：黃色(holiday)、藍(lán)色(visiting families and friends)占比相同(35%)；綠色(business)占比26%，大約是紅色(other)的4倍

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